Have you tried writing a hypnosis story, especially one for a general or teen audience?

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I've tried writing stories a few times. I definitely enjoy writing them (I hope to be a screen writer some day) but I have yet to produce anything hypnosis related that I'd really feel is 'up to snuff' enough (for lack of better words) to post here.

Interesting idea though...

If you aren't charging then they're "Requests" not "Commissions" I'm guessing.

Also I'll place a request for any more hypnosis even if it seems like a bad idea! or a "I like the idea but I'm not sure if they'll like this" idea.

Maybe a reinforcement of previous files.

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A reinforcement file seems like it could definitely be in the cards. That's a very good idea, thanks.

"If you aren't charging then they're "Requests" not "Commissions" I'm guessing."

lol, perhaps if I truly do wish to one day be a screen writer, I should start by learning to use the English language correctly. Thank you. Henceforth I'm going to use the word 'request'.

Urm, H-hi...

I just wanted to ask you something, when your reading one of your files, doesn't having to scroll down the page distract you a little while your trying to go under? If so, any tips?

Also do you have any advise for someone who reading your files to make the experince more effect or to easier to go into a trance?

I'm actually quite nevous about using them, I really don't why

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Yeah, i am stuck in that block as well. My best suggestion is to outline your work, then work on the important elements and see if the story can work from there.

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No excuses now, until i have something of site quality this stays like it is.

It is better to contemplate than to be absolute.

I totally understand the nerves thing, no worries, lol. I know when I started getting into hypnosis, I had a deal of trouble going under just from being so excited. The only real advice I have is to not be impeded by perceived lack of success, a lot of times hypnosis and trancing is working even when you think it's not.

That ties into your other question - scrolling in theory shouldn't break your trance, but again, I understand that concentrating on 'doing' something, even something as small as scrolling can distract from the trance. Bear in mind that being in trance doesn't mean you're necessarily totally unaware of your surroundings, you should be able to do things like scroll or scratch and itch while maintaining a trance, at least for the effects my files have aimed at thus far.

Ideally if possible, I'd just say try and read them in a way that is most comfortable for you. Do whatever you'd do normally if you want to be more comfy, and if scrolling is a huge impairment to getting into that relaxed trance state, consider even copy-pasting the file into a word processor and just reading it like it were a relaxing book or novel.

Hopefully that helps you out somewhat. Trust me when I say that when it comes to this sort of thing, 90% of its success is gonna come from you, the reader, just doing what you need to do to make it work for you and not sweating the small stuff. If you have any further questions or concerns please feel to ask, I'm always happy to help.

Oh I see. this has really been helpful thank you.

Yeah I think I understand, I watch this guy call jnspires videos. I offen have to swallow while I'm watching them

There is also one more question I would like to ask. There are some people that think that hypnosis isn't real, that is just someone tricking you (That's just me being kind, I have heard people say worse)

Why is this?

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Mostly people say that because they think hypnosis works the way it does in movies and TV shows. It doesn't work like that. It's impossible to FORCE someone to do anything under hypnosis, hypnosis simply induces a state where suggestions are more readily accepted and inhibitions are lowered, but much as you could not convince someone who's had a few drinks to take a bath with a toaster, you could not command someone to do something they are very much against via hypnosis. I'd recommend for anyone skeptical to simply take the time to google it, read what medical experts have to say, and form an opinion based on that. The FACT is, there is such a thing as trance, that's medical fact. Hypnosis is just a means of inducing it. There are other ways one may induce this state. People can argue back and forth about how effective hypnosis is as far as inducing a trance, but anyone who claims that there is no such thing as a trance is willfully ignorant.

As far as the swallowing thing, it's funny, that is exactly the problem I had when I started out, lol. I don't really know how else to phrase this, but the best way to get over that speedbump is to just try to ignore it.